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Three steps to a smoother writing style


My favorite sentence from today’s re-blog from Roz Morris:

“Verbs are your propellant” :-)

Nail Your Novel

317528561_6f008366a3_zThis week Joanna Penn invited me to her podcast to talk about writing style and voice, which you can see in a few weeks’ time. We got so involved in the subject that we didn’t finish her question list and this point didn’t make the cut. So I thought it would make a useful post.

Joanna asked me to pinpoint a few easy style fixes – so here they are.

1 Ditch the filler words

Look at this:

Paul had told me on the phone during our initial contact that he had been swindled several years before by a man who he had considered to be a friend.

Quite a mouthful for such a simple point. Give me my red pen.

What worries me here is the number of syllables. They slow the sentence in the reader’s mind. Sometimes that’s good, but sometimes those syllables are unnecessary speed bumps. Here…

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4 responses to “Three steps to a smoother writing style

  1. Adrian G Hilder March 30, 2017 at 11:34 am

    Great article and worth having the reminder even when we mostly remember these principles.

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